Hey!
We had to provide feedback on our peers' thematic paragraphs for this week's reading assignment. First and foremost, I'd like to express my appreciation to everyone who provided feedback on my thematic paragraphs. I've read them all and found them to be very useful and beneficial. My classmates' comments and suggestions made me realize that there was still room for improvement in my thematic paragraphs. I was able to see my thematic paragraphs from various angles.
Here is the link to my thematic paragraphs:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vSh6FrkPJvevwkL0ahdeZl9nLv0hKRSb_wtSDXX2jek/edit?usp=sharing
Thankfully I didn't have to do much editing because I was one of the students whose thematic paragraphs were highlighted in green. However, I was advised to arrange my paragraphs in an order that was easier to read. Another peer suggested that I should shorten the citations as I had too many names in the paragraphs.
After reading my own paragraphs over I again, I realized I had some critiques of my own. I felt like I didn’t have strong enough opinions in my paragraphs so I went back and re-wrote/fixed them.
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| screenshot of my google docs |
In conclusion, this week’s reading task was straightforward and easy to complete. The feedback I received from my peers were very useful and they definitely helped me see what areas I could improve on! That's it for now, see you next week!
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